Ã¢â‚¬Â¢ What do you think of the general background idea?
It's starting to look good.
Ã¢â‚¬Â¢ Could you suggest names for my Cannoness, Inquisitor, Grey Knight Hero, and Guard Section Officer?
Ã¢â‚¬Â¢ What do you think the artifact could be? I'm thinking an orb, or a crystal of some sort. I'm also planning to name this as well, depending on what it is.
How about some sort of staff about the length of your arm? Perhaps not sturdy enough to be used as a weapon......
Ã¢â‚¬Â¢ Do you have any ideas on which planet this could be based on? It should be of some importance, but not a "key" planet (Mars for example). A pretty standard hive world, or forgeworld
The size of the galaxy means that you have a huge amount of choice in making stuff up for yourself with planets etc.....
Ã¢â‚¬Â¢ The fiction piece i'm planning to write, i think, will be a sort of "report" by a member of the inquisition. (possibly the Inquisitor himself, or one of his staff). Do you have any ideas about how i could set this out? What should the scene/setting be?
Why not as a four way diary/report? I.E. Write entries for each of the army commanders and the inquisitor. Start each entry from the point where each Commander and the Inquisitor enters the story.
Ã¢â‚¬Â¢ Are there any holes in the fluff? Any glaring ommisions or implausibilities?
None that I can see at the moment....
I thank you all in advance.