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Part 2 of the tale of Zacharias - WestGamer
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 14, 2007 8:21 pm 
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Hey all! just finished writing the next part in the (ridiculously) long story I'm currently writing, this is the second half (funny that) and this is where the s*** hits the fan! (soon anyway very soon)
this part is still quite slow but necessary (sigh :roll: )
so here we are, more soon!

Two Weeks ago, Inquisitorial Station, Kalthax IV

Inquisitor Broxin looked on horrified at the scene in front of him, stormtroopers cordoned off the chamber and forensic adepts and medicae staff assessed the scene. Broxin ran a hand through his permanently ruffled black hair and tried to stop himself shaking his carapace armour enhancing his movements made it painfully obvious, he looked up at the wall and wished he hadn’t. On the chambers wall Lord Inquisitor Uristion was impaled straight through with his own force sword stuck a full foot through Uristion himself and the wall behind. A massive smear of blood where the vital fluid had leaked from Uristion’s body trailed down to the floor in a frighteningly large puddle, Broxin was amazed that the assassin had managed to infiltrate an inquisitorial fortress but the thought that chilled him the most as he realized it was that more then likely it had been one of their own.

One Week Ago, Onboard the Illuminatus Dux Mars class Cruiser, Fringe Worlds

The squad of space marines, giants in power armour each cradling massive boltguns in the armored fists surrounded the inquisitor, they all had their boltguns aimed squarely at her, “W-what is this?!â€


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Just put them on here mate, by the way, i loved your story, Eldar and mon keigh alliance, i despise yet am criously drawn to read further, good wrok mate,

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Well here's the next its a fair bit (I got a bit enthusiastic) hope you all like and next time the action starts (unfortunatelly character development is a necessary evil :wink: ) enjoy!

Over the next day Darien explained everything to Zacharias whose head spun from the sheer enormity of it all. Darien himself was now a member of the Ordo Malleus and more importantly part of an organization within the Ordo that trained, supervised or eliminated exceptionally powerful psykers, Zacharias of whom was one apparently. Darien had recovered Zacharias and had allowed his psyk-augurs to examine the scene on Escaldor; they had nearly passed out from the psychic overload. Currently the space marine strike cruiser was two months away from Ontarian III the black ship they were currently on was 6 weeks away giving them ample time to catch them. Darien had also revealed that the remnants of Zacharias sword had been reforged into a new force sword to better serve its master; the sword itself was breathtaking as Zacharias took it in. Over a meter and a half long, single edged, inlaid with psychically conductive circuitry a hybrid of Imperial force weapon technology and Eldar witchblade technology, a hardened wraithbone core surrounded by an admantium sheath, the guard and hilt both carved from pure wraithbone and fashioned for elegance and efficiency. The sword was a living piece of art, a conscious instrument of death. Zacharias could not wait to begin training with it, the blade itself eager to be used. They both didn’t have to wait long.

Zacharias stepped out into a gargantuan chamber in the bowels of the Black ship, the chamber was huge easily three hundred meters long and wide and almost sixty high, the interior was made to represent some sort to of rocky desert and Darien explained that the walls were six feet thick layered rockrete and plasteel, and that an entire bank of void shields encompassed the chamber, when the eldar warlock, exarch and dire avengers joined him Zacharias could understand the necessity of it. The warlock stepped forward the rest of the eldar hung back perching themselves on various rocks, the warlock took off his helm to reveal his rune tattooed face, alien and porcelain in nature, the dark runes contrasted vividly.
“Greetings mon-keigh, it has been requested by my lord-seer that my kin and I prepare you for the coming conflict, this shall aid us in that endeavorâ€


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Damn, how long did I look away?!?! The last mesage I got about this guy was about the last entry you did, & I only opened that tonight!

Haven't had time to read either yet, though I've bookmarked both. Going on what I've read before, they both should be good.

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@imperator, yup I've done a fair bit now up to 15 pg's/ 8250 words so yeah a fair bit with a fair bit still to go! :D
Well the next part is done with possible THE hardest training ever, next installment shall see the invasion of the inquisitorial fortress world by our intrepid heroes, until then enjoy!

5 Weeks ago, Onboard the Black Ship in the warp enroute to Ontarian III
After three days of fighting the warlock Benihon called for a break to allow Zacharias to recuperate, the constant fighting had exhausted him utterly and he had to be carried back up to his quarters by servitors, so tired he couldn’t even stand. Before Zacharias had passed out, Benihon had told Zacharias that he would be waiting in the training room when he was ready, before sitting down and meditating to recuperate. The remaining eldar had all watched genuinely impressed by Zacharias’ performance, the warp spider exarch Litgninon had left afterwards to work on his warp-jump generator, already heavily specialized towards his specifications he altered it to even more demanding tolerances, he knew he would need it.

It took another two days for Zacharias to regain consciousness and another three of recuperation before he was told by the exarch to go down to the training room. He went down to the room, his sword sheathed at his waist, he wore only a tight dark blue body glove with shoulder and chest guards of flak armour, as he entered the room he saw the warlock waiting witchblade point first in the ground, the other eldar perched on their rocks and Darien taking a seat on a boulder. The warlock looked up as Zacharias approached he wasn’t wearing his helm or robe his body encased in his xenos rune-armour.
“Welcome back mon-keigh, now that you have mastered fighting with a sword we shall begin the real trainingâ€


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yay more story! you need to creat a thread that just has the compleate story in it so i dont have to keep refrencing back to other threads

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Well the next part is done and thanks to eckythump for his proof reading pointing out that I had mixed up a refractor field with a displacer field for reasons unknown :oops: more soon! (story not mistakes...but you never know...) and if anything is spelt wrong or doesn't make sense then please let me know so I can change it as you never seem to pick up your mistakes in writing (probably because you know what its meant to say)

@mr brettonnia: I'll probably do that once its all done as its quite off-putting trying to read through a wall of text small chunks for now

Main Security Station of the Inquisitorial Fortress on Ontarian III

“We have an unauthorized inquisitorial black ship entering sub-orbital range; sensors are registering it as the Mallues Vindicum request permission to engage orbital security measuresâ€


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Well here's the next part! The action heats up as they reach Ontarion III. Once again your thoughts and comments are welcome good or bad, more soon and enjoy!

Present time, Ontarian III the execution chamber

Sheba was lead into the execution chamber chained and shackled, she was flanked by four astartes marines from the Storm Lords chapter, they towered over her in their mother of pearl armour gleaming in the half-light of the chamber as they strode forward their footsteps booming on the hard floor. In the raised seats above the execution podium sat five of the inquisitor lords, following the false security alert Shidan and Nilos had disappeared along with inquisitor Broxin. The chamber itself was a perfect hexagon of black granite, with seats raised around the edge for any witnesses. In a small pulpit an archivist wrote all who attended and all the required details. A priest roamed the room swinging a smoking censer and intoning the litany of damned souls, as medicae personnel prepped and powered up the servitor mangler that would execute Sheba via evisceration. The marines lead Sheba to the altar of execution where she was handled over to the medicae personnel the marines moved aside taking up positions in the corners of the chamber, giant bolt pistols and chainswords clutched in the armored gauntlets they watched impassively as the medicae strapped Sheba onto the altar and attached various monitoring nodes so as to ascertain when her life ended. The priest finished chanting and paused this was usually to allow any final words from the prisoners; Sheba said nothing and with a resigned sigh shut her eyes. Lord Yistern nodded to the medicae who began to start up the servitor mangler its six limbs splaying out like some abominable mechanical insect, it descended towards Sheba who opened her eyes as it lowered towards her saws buzzing and claws clicking and whirring, Sheba breather in. And out, everything seemed to slow down; she could make out every perfect detail of the mangler, the ceilings murals, the witnesses, the marines armour. Everything, the mangler was centimeters from her, she breathed out and
Time seemed
To.
Stop.

There was a blur impossibly fast the servitor mangler was thrown across the chamber crashing into an empty row of seats crushing them beneath its bulk. Sheba gasped standing above her stood Zacharias, cloak billowing in some ethereal breeze, wearing a black body glove adorned only with his rosette as the clip to his cloak; he casually held his force sword over his shoulder and smiled at Sheba. From all around the chamber there was an uproar the marines began to charge forward impossibly slow. The inquisitor lords all rose except Rokirn who vanished and appeared beside the altar his displacer field transported him across the chamber; he had a plasma pistol against Zacharias’ head. Rokirn smiled grimly as he began to pull the trigger. Litgninon the warp spider exarch appeared next him hand placed on Rokirn’s shoulder, the exarch activated his jump generator instantly transporting the two of them away. Five dire avengers had also burst into the room accompanied by the warlock and Darien. Yistern and Faros both rose psi-force billowing, Gurdon and Hamin grabbed them as Gurdon deactivated his limiter with a thought- pulse Yistern fainted at the sudden void ripped her power away from her, Faros was stronger and remained conscious bleeding from his ears and nose, he was physically helpless against the monstrous Hamin. Gurdon smiled at Zacharias he and Hamin had worked many times with Zacharias and respected him greatly, that and they knew there was no possible way for Sheba Lucien to murder lord Uristion from over three thousand light years away.

The marines opened fire, two of the dire avengers were pulped to red ruin Zacharias frowned and leapt to interpose himself between the two parties. Darien reached Sheba and propped her over his shoulder and began to run the three remaining dire avengers and the warlock escorted him as Zacharias faced down the marines. The three space marines fired after the escaping prisoner and xenos bolt pistols roaring but the escapees had already rounded the corner the marines still over fifty meters away.
“After them!â€


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